Tuesday, October 15, 2013
3 critique - alice robinson
For this project I wanted to portray in my integrative piece that standing for long time caused pain, and I feel I got that across- to me. I liked how the "standing" was not straight; because why should it be?? The whole point was that I had SCOLIOSIS and that my spine is crooked. Standing for a long time, therefore, made it a whole lot worse and eventually I needed surgery. My geometric piece I feel I could have stretched it a bit farther, I wish I had more layers to put into it, however I did not HATE this job- it just sucked. Its hard to hate a job in general (unless it truly is a bad position) because you are getting paid for it and this generation, I feel, is very grateful for jobs and opportunities. Any way, this piece I didn't mind the white space, I just feel I could have done something more. My deconstructive piece was a failure I think, if I could I would like to just start over with that one altogether, without a photograph. Why I chose the photograph was because it made sense at the time, and I tried to make it work, but lesson learned, don't push things that aren't meant to be.
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